In Steal this Plot, the Nobles layout the path to spicy, complex plots.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The following is excerpted from June and William Noble’s classic, Steal This Plot: A Writer’s Guide to Story Structure and Plagiarism. (The Write Thought recently republished Steal This Plot in our Classic Wisdom on Writing Series.)

There are certain items which become basic to story construction, and we’ve chosen to call them “plot motivators.” They aren’t plots, nor are they dramatic situations. They simply move the plot along and provide drama. There are thirteen in all which cover most available story opportunities for the writer.

But why plot motivator?

Because a plot—the story within a story—without some direction is like a large boulder in a bubbling stream. It’s a lovely scene. You see it, you might even be able to touch it, but it doesn’t move! Plot motivators make a story move, and they are the prime devices by which a writer can steal a plot and make it his own.

Take Benchley’s Jaws. Many have compared it, at least superficially, to Herman Melville’s Moby Dick in the sense that there is an unremitting chase or search for a great white fish. Here again we have a similar plot—a human-devouring beast that must be destroyed. But look at what Benchley has done. He has asked “what if…” the scene becomes the south shore of Long Island… the fish is a Great White Shark… the hunters are motivated by more financial reward than anything else….

Yet before Benchley’s plot will really work, he has to ask why! Why must the fish be destroyed? The answer lies in the plot motivator, i.e. vengeance. Ahab in Moby Dick and his counterpart, the fishing boat captain in Jaws have both suffered grievous harm from the great white fish, and so they set out to destroy it to salve their own concepts of revenge. Vengeance moves the plot along; it motivates it!

Following are the common plot motivators that appear and reappear through literature. At any given time, of course, more than one plot motivator can exist side by side, affecting the story. The point is that these are the wheels that make the story go; they are the underpinnings for the various dramatic situations. You can take any story idea, attach one or more of these motivators to it, and you’ll have a plot and a story line.

In no particular order of importance the plot motivators are:

Vengeance

Catastrophe

Love and Hate

The Chase

Grief and Loss

Rebellion

Persecution

Self-Sacrifice

Survival (deliverance)

Rivalry

Discovery (quest)

Ambition

Betrayal

As good as plot motivators are in developing a story, there are times when they need further substance and direction. Think, for instance, about Ernest Hemingway’s well-told story, The Old Man and the Sea. The plot is simple and straightforward: Santiago, an old Cuban fisherman, sets out in his small boat to pursue his livelihood, alone and with just the barest of gear. Far from shore he lands the largest marlin he has ever seen, a fish that if he gets to port intact will rectify, perhaps forever, the misery he has endured throughout his life. Eighty-four days he has gone without catching a fish, and now his salvation is at hand!

Enter the plot motivator—survival. Hemingway paints a vivid portrait of Santiago’s fight, not only to land the huge fish but also to get it, intact, back to shore where he would be honored and recognized for such a feat. And it is truly an epic battle for survival, for the fisherman is almost overwhelmed time and time again, first by the huge marlin itself and then by the predators who are drawn to the boat by the trailing blood of the marlin as it remains lashed alongside. Survival is clearly the plot motivator for this story, and a battle for survival is fine story material.

When you are reading a novel or short story, see if you can identify multiple plot motivators. The best fiction writers mix and match plot motivators to make plots complex and rewarding to the reader.

Just a write thought.

Happy New Year.

 

E-books range from $.99 to $12.99. What's the right price?

At Quill Driver Books we put a lot of thought into the pricing of each title we published.

Here is an abbreviated list of things we considered:

• How big we anticipated the market for the title would be. A small, concentrated market may support a higher price because there are fewer books for those who are in this market to choose from. Large general markets may require a competitive price.

• The buyer demographics: Is this book for poor, starving writers or successful business people?

• How are competing titles priced? The last thing we wanted to do was to compete on price, but we knew the retailers were sensitive to pricing and might not stock a book they felt was overpriced.

• What the demand for the book would be. We felt we could get a couple of extra bucks for a book written by an author with a huge platform. Duh.

• What it cost us to print the book.

With all these factors—and more—to consider, we likely missed the optimum price, that is, the price that would return the largest profit to us. This price is often called the “sweet spot.”

For instance, if we priced a book so we netted $3 on each copy and sold 10,000 copies, we would make $30,000. But, if we priced it with $6 in it for us and sold 40 percent less, or 6,000 copies, we would make $36,000, a 20 percent increase in profit. Of course if the price that returned $6 each cut our sales to 3,000 copies we would make only $18,000.

Until a title sold down and we went back to press on it, we were stuck with the price we set since it was printed on the back cover.

I say, we “likely” missed the optimum price because, how could we ever know unless we published the identical book at different prices in identical parallel universes?

You can see why we gave it so much thought.

Enter E-Books

One grand thing about e-books is, since there is no printing involved, once edited, designed, typeset, and formatted, the cost of an e-book is zero. Another is that the retail price a publisher sets can vary day to day.

But, with these two advantages, what does a publisher need to be concerned about when pricing an e-book? Vook, the innovative company that melds books with video, has issued a splendid white paper that goes a long way toward answering this question. I’ll let you in on what it has to say in an upcoming blog.

Clever, Clever

Crown Publishing is rushing out a $.99 e-book on Rick Perry, the latest candidate for the Republican Presidential nomination. The book is actually one chapter from The Victory Lab a fall 2011 release by Sasha Issenberg. According to Crown, Victory will present a broad coverage of electoral strategies and the motivations behind the voting decisions people make and isn’t solely about Perry. This is doubly clever, because the $.99 book will sell on its own and act as an ad for the whole book. Why not consider doing this with a chapter of one of your books? If you’re an author, suggest this to your publisher.

Just a write thought.

As most of us know, Borders is in trouble. For one thing, Borders has “delayed” payments to publishers and other suppliers. I leave it to you to imagine what that is going to do to the company’s ability to resupply.

 Borders’ problems are publishers and authors’ problems. If Borders closes up shop, there will be hundreds of fewer bookstores to help get our books into the hands of readers (buyers!). I knew an old printer once who told me, “Once a business starts to go south, it continues going south.”  I think the following e-mail may be an example of this. 

This is a for-real Borders e-mail. I assume all or much of it is boilerplate. I had e-mailed asking what my Borders account info was.

Dear Valued Customer,

Thank you for contacting Borders regarding your account inquiry,

As we processed your request using your email account, It shows that you already registered on Borders rewards member.
However, kindly give us the following information for we to processed your request.

Card # 89066xxxxx

User name:

First name:

Last name:

Zip code:

Address:

I hope that this can be helpful to you. For further assistance, please don’t hesitate to contact us at 1-800-770-7811, or email us at
www.Borders.com

 Sincerely,
Borders Customer Care
www.Borders.com

The only thing I changed is the account number. Maybe this isn’t boilerplate. Maybe Borders outsourced their customer service to the underbidder in war-torn Somalia. Either way, it isn’t reassuring.

Perhaps we can look for independent bookstores to make a come back?

Just a write thought.

A friend of mine recently sent me a chapter of his memoir. The tone of this memoir is quiet and calm—like most of us, shootouts and runaway trains are not part of his life. That’s fine, but since there isn’t much action to keep the reader’s attention, I suggested he deliver a richer picture of the characters in the memoir by adding a bit of color.

The use of seemingly commonplace details—“adding color” in writing parlance—helps define your characters and makes them more interesting to the reader.

For instance, my friend has a scene where he and his mother are going through a family photo album. I thought this was an opportunity to develop the character of his mother by focusing on the album. Was it worn? Leather or plastic? Did she keep pressed flowers in it? Did she keep it safely on the top shelf of the hall closet or toss it casually in the magazine rack beside her easy chair?

These simple details would tell us a little about his mother and make our reading experience richer.

An example often repeated in writers’ workshops goes something like this: Don’t tell us he ordered a beer, tell us he ordered a Budweiser (Tsingtao, Guinness Stout, whatever). The beer a man drinks tells us something about the guy.

If you have him stomping the dust off his steel-toed work boots before he enters the bar, we begin to get a feeling for him. If he orders a long-necked Lone Star the image of a rough, unsophisticated man grows. If he slips a thin gold band into his Levis as he pulls out the barstool, our understanding of who he is and what he’s like becomes even more clear.

Note that the color in this example wasn’t delivered only by the use of adjectives, but also with verbs (“stomping,” “slips”) and nouns (“work boots,” “Levis”). Color can be added with adverbs and dialogue, too.

Specific verbs and nouns (and authentic-sounding dialogue) are best to use to give your writing color. Be wary of the overuse of adjectives and adverbs.

I’m not trying to sell a book here (or maybe I am?), but there is a excellent chapter by Thomas Hunter titled “Bring Her On and Let Her Scream: Adding Colorful Description to Enliven Your Nonfiction” in The Portable Writers’ Conference. Hunter’s information works well for fiction writers too.

Just a write thought.

You’ll be able to tell your children’s children that you remember the day Google launched Google eBooks and changed the landscape of publishing.

Well, there may be a little hyperbole in that sentence, but today Google put more than 3 million e-books in reach of anyone in the U.S. Soon, I’m sure, availability within the rest of the world will follow.

Besides Google’s huge reach, Google e-books will be popular because:

  • Nearly every e-reader (not Kindle—yet), iPad-like tablet, and smart phone will work with Google e-Books. As will laptops and PCs
  • Books are stored online, so there is no limit, storage-wise, to the number you can have in your library.
  • Current best-sellers are available.
  • So are hundreds of thousands of other books including the classics.
  • Self-published books will be available.
  • Many out-of-copyright titles are free.
  • Since the book normally remains in the cloud, when you switch devices, say from your laptop to your iPhone, you can just continue reading at the place you left off.
  • You can download an e-pub or PDF version to read offline.
  • You can buy books directly from Google or from one of a number of independent booksellers.

Here’s a video of how it works.

Two reasons e-books are important to authors and publishers:

One of the biggest challenges every publisher has is distribution. Soon an author’s work can easily be made available from Jersey to Jakarta.

Instant gratification will drive sales. Say you are on the beach in Bali and the fellow on the blanket next to you tells you of a terrific thriller he’s reading. Within minutes, if that long, you can be reading your own copy.

There are a lot of good things about the digital delivery of books, but some rough spots remain to be worked out. Not the least of which has to do with how the sale price of an e-book will be split between the retailer (Google in this case), the publisher, and the author. This will, of course, be worked out to the satisfaction of all since, like water, economics finds its own level.

Just a write thought.

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