Over 1,000 people attended the DBW 2012 conference.

 

 

I attended the Digital Book World Conference in New York City toward the end of January.

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It was held at the Sheraton Towers on 7th Avenue, just down the street from Molyvos Restaurant where famed freelance editor Patrick LoBrutto and I lunched on roasted octopus.

Here, to get you thinking, and in no particular order, is just a little of what I culled from the three-day affair:

• Kobo, the Canadian answer to Kindle and now Japanese-owned, is transforming itself for the international market.

• Seven percent of Kobo’s titles are self-published—it’s 14% in Africa—making Kobo among the world’s largest publishers.

• Kobo’s English language sales are up in non-English markets 300% in “all kinds of places we never expected.”

• Metadata has never been so important. Including the basics increases sales 98%. Enhanced metadata with only four additional elements increased sales an additional 55%. For more information on metadata go to www.nielsenbookscan.co.uk.

• One in three American adults now owns a tablet or e-reader. These people are just one click away from ordering a book no matter where they are.

• Today books find the reader instead of the other way around.

• Bookstore recommendations are said to still drive 30% of the sales.

• Amazon has sold 1.3 million kindles in the UK or 92% of all UK e-readers.

• Generally DRM (Digital Rights Management) is looked down on by those in the industry. It is thought that it might even make piracy worse.

• Today we can gather more data than ever before. Including data on how consumers are using the books. Which pages they linger on and more.

• Getting the data is one thing, figuring how to use it another.

• E-books are 26% of adult fiction sales. Nonfiction lags behind fiction.

• With illustrated e-books, making the consumer pinch and zoom is thought to produce a poor reader experience. This is a problem with small screens like the one on the iPhone.

• The price range of $7.99 to $10.99 is popular with illustrated e-books.

• Book apps are taking a beating with publishers considering the e-pub options first. E-pub3 should further this trend.

• Measure the success of your website not just in traffic, but in engagement.

• Look for additional ways beyond selling books to create revenue from your site. Perhaps partner with a company with an allied product.

• As we all know, technology is advancing at a never before experienced rate, but, according to futurist David Houle, the rate at which technology is advancing is itself advancing 100-fold. He predicts that the same amount of  technological progress of the last 1,000 years will be experienced in the next decade.

• Curation is the next big thing in the Internet.

• Be the parent of the future, not the child of the past.

If the advances in technology don’t excite you, feel around to see if you are lying in a satin-lined box.

Just a write thought.

In Steal this Plot, the Nobles layout the path to spicy, complex plots.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The following is excerpted from June and William Noble’s classic, Steal This Plot: A Writer’s Guide to Story Structure and Plagiarism. (The Write Thought recently republished Steal This Plot in our Classic Wisdom on Writing Series.)

There are certain items which become basic to story construction, and we’ve chosen to call them “plot motivators.” They aren’t plots, nor are they dramatic situations. They simply move the plot along and provide drama. There are thirteen in all which cover most available story opportunities for the writer.

But why plot motivator?

Because a plot—the story within a story—without some direction is like a large boulder in a bubbling stream. It’s a lovely scene. You see it, you might even be able to touch it, but it doesn’t move! Plot motivators make a story move, and they are the prime devices by which a writer can steal a plot and make it his own.

Take Benchley’s Jaws. Many have compared it, at least superficially, to Herman Melville’s Moby Dick in the sense that there is an unremitting chase or search for a great white fish. Here again we have a similar plot—a human-devouring beast that must be destroyed. But look at what Benchley has done. He has asked “what if…” the scene becomes the south shore of Long Island… the fish is a Great White Shark… the hunters are motivated by more financial reward than anything else….

Yet before Benchley’s plot will really work, he has to ask why! Why must the fish be destroyed? The answer lies in the plot motivator, i.e. vengeance. Ahab in Moby Dick and his counterpart, the fishing boat captain in Jaws have both suffered grievous harm from the great white fish, and so they set out to destroy it to salve their own concepts of revenge. Vengeance moves the plot along; it motivates it!

Following are the common plot motivators that appear and reappear through literature. At any given time, of course, more than one plot motivator can exist side by side, affecting the story. The point is that these are the wheels that make the story go; they are the underpinnings for the various dramatic situations. You can take any story idea, attach one or more of these motivators to it, and you’ll have a plot and a story line.

In no particular order of importance the plot motivators are:

Vengeance

Catastrophe

Love and Hate

The Chase

Grief and Loss

Rebellion

Persecution

Self-Sacrifice

Survival (deliverance)

Rivalry

Discovery (quest)

Ambition

Betrayal

As good as plot motivators are in developing a story, there are times when they need further substance and direction. Think, for instance, about Ernest Hemingway’s well-told story, The Old Man and the Sea. The plot is simple and straightforward: Santiago, an old Cuban fisherman, sets out in his small boat to pursue his livelihood, alone and with just the barest of gear. Far from shore he lands the largest marlin he has ever seen, a fish that if he gets to port intact will rectify, perhaps forever, the misery he has endured throughout his life. Eighty-four days he has gone without catching a fish, and now his salvation is at hand!

Enter the plot motivator—survival. Hemingway paints a vivid portrait of Santiago’s fight, not only to land the huge fish but also to get it, intact, back to shore where he would be honored and recognized for such a feat. And it is truly an epic battle for survival, for the fisherman is almost overwhelmed time and time again, first by the huge marlin itself and then by the predators who are drawn to the boat by the trailing blood of the marlin as it remains lashed alongside. Survival is clearly the plot motivator for this story, and a battle for survival is fine story material.

When you are reading a novel or short story, see if you can identify multiple plot motivators. The best fiction writers mix and match plot motivators to make plots complex and rewarding to the reader.

Just a write thought.

Happy New Year.

 

Under the category of “Beware What You Wish For” comes this author-centric video in which the plot device is the plot device.

Plot Device from Red Giant on Vimeo.

That was worth nine minutes, wasn’t it?
I first saw this on Kristin, the polite agent’s, blog: Pub Rants.
BTW, polite literary agents abound, it just seems otherwise since the self-impressed ones make so much noise.

Just a write thought.

Burke's writing is as rich and multihued as a Louisiana bayou.

I’m a fan of James Lee Burke. I thought I’d read every Dave Robicheaux novel he’s written, but just yesterday I found a jacket-less hard cover copy of Crusader’s Cross mixed in with books I’d picked up somewhere and had been meaning to get to. It was like opening a discarded wallet and finding a hundred dollar bill.

Burke is strong on imagery and thrifty on words.

Here, in Cross, is how he tells us what  Dave Robicheaux and his brother Jimmie’s childhoods were like:

Before breakfast, my mother would return from the barn smelling of manure and horse sweat, a pail of frothy milk in one hand and an armful of brown eggs smeared with chickenshit clutched against her chest. Then she would pull off her shirt, scrub her hands and arms with Lava soap under the pump in the sink, and in her bra fill our bowls with cush-cush and make ham-and-onion sandwiches for our lunches.

Jimmie and I both had paper routes in New Iberia’s red-light district. We set pins in the bowling alley and with our mother washed bottles in the Tabasco factory on the bayou. My father hand-built the home we lived in, notching and pegging the oak beams with such seamless craftsmanship that it survived the full brunt of a half dozen hurricanes with no structural damage. My mother ironed clothes in a laundry nine hours a day in hundred-and-ten-degree heat. She scalded and picked chickens for five cents apiece in our backyard, and secretly saved money in a coffee can for two years in order to buy an electric ice grinder and start a snowball concession at the minor league baseball park.

Our parents were illiterate and barely spoke English, but they were among the most brave and resourceful people I ever knew. Neither of them would consciously set about to do wrong. But they destroyed one another just the same—my father with his alcoholism, my mother with her lust and insatiable need for male attention. Then they destroyed their self-respect, their family, and their home. They did all this with the innocence of people who had never been farther away from their Cajun world than their weekend honeymoon trip to New Orleans.

In three short, image-filled paragraphs Burke shows us, rather than tells us, his family was poor, hardworking, and dysfunctional.

Whether you’re writing fiction or nonfiction, Burke’s frugal yet rich style is worth emulating.

Just a write thought.

 

A friend of mine recently sent me a chapter of his memoir. The tone of this memoir is quiet and calm—like most of us, shootouts and runaway trains are not part of his life. That’s fine, but since there isn’t much action to keep the reader’s attention, I suggested he deliver a richer picture of the characters in the memoir by adding a bit of color.

The use of seemingly commonplace details—“adding color” in writing parlance—helps define your characters and makes them more interesting to the reader.

For instance, my friend has a scene where he and his mother are going through a family photo album. I thought this was an opportunity to develop the character of his mother by focusing on the album. Was it worn? Leather or plastic? Did she keep pressed flowers in it? Did she keep it safely on the top shelf of the hall closet or toss it casually in the magazine rack beside her easy chair?

These simple details would tell us a little about his mother and make our reading experience richer.

An example often repeated in writers’ workshops goes something like this: Don’t tell us he ordered a beer, tell us he ordered a Budweiser (Tsingtao, Guinness Stout, whatever). The beer a man drinks tells us something about the guy.

If you have him stomping the dust off his steel-toed work boots before he enters the bar, we begin to get a feeling for him. If he orders a long-necked Lone Star the image of a rough, unsophisticated man grows. If he slips a thin gold band into his Levis as he pulls out the barstool, our understanding of who he is and what he’s like becomes even more clear.

Note that the color in this example wasn’t delivered only by the use of adjectives, but also with verbs (“stomping,” “slips”) and nouns (“work boots,” “Levis”). Color can be added with adverbs and dialogue, too.

Specific verbs and nouns (and authentic-sounding dialogue) are best to use to give your writing color. Be wary of the overuse of adjectives and adverbs.

I’m not trying to sell a book here (or maybe I am?), but there is a excellent chapter by Thomas Hunter titled “Bring Her On and Let Her Scream: Adding Colorful Description to Enliven Your Nonfiction” in The Portable Writers’ Conference. Hunter’s information works well for fiction writers too.

Just a write thought.

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